🔆 solange + sade + nina 🔆

+ Run-DMC in the moonlight

This is the first page of my second novel, Bliss. It was published in 2005. I miss this main character, and want to go back to her. Let me know what you think of this introduction. I look back on it like, all of this could have been more concise. Punchier. More dramatic. But then I’m like, it is super dramatic 🤔